He caught her rhythm, pulling and releasing, cradling and crushing; pushing up through his fingers with each swing, mining up, like an otter through wet sand. Her sounds shifted from moans to grunts, insistent, almost desperate cries from the throat … He unbuttoned the front of her shirt and pulled it to the side so that her breast was uncovered, her nipple poking out, upturned like the nose of the loveliest nocturnal animal, sniffing in the night. He took it between his lips and sucked the salt from her. He hooked his fingers into her waistband, caught the elastic of her underwear and began pulling down. The knot on her light cotton trousers held fast as the fabric reached the curve of her backside. She twisted from him and stepped back.Read more terribly bad sex from The Shape of Her at the Guardians website, or have a look at other contenders for worst sex story books.
Thursday, December 2, 2010
And The Winner of the 2010 Bad Sex in Fiction Award Goes To...
...The Shape of Her by Rowan Somerville. Here's an excerpt: